Short,sweet and a good premise for a possible series.What irked me about this well written tale was the way the author decided to just throw aside the credible structure and throw in something overly dramatic. Declaring undying love for someone you have only known for all of a few hours, especially when you're supposed to be a cold-hearted killer. No self-control what so ever. 'I lust you or hey incredibly lickable male species I want you to be my living ice-cream.' That I could understand. Wailing 'I love you' quicker than the blink of an eye, it just made the story less enjoyable.Despite that minor hiccup Adrian gives the reader a glimpse of her talent in this short sample.